Tuesday, January 23, 2007

Descriptive Paragraph

As I walk through those wonderful halls I get amazed of how many things there is to buy. Shoes, clothes, make-up. WOW!!!!!!!! It’s like if I’m in heaven. Its not only my hobby but It’s also my passion. I LOVE TO SHOP!!!!!!!

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

i like this peice, i think that it was really told from the heart, and hey, i learned something new, now i know that you love to shop.

Dylan Della said...

I like this desriptive writing paragraph. It was good, it made me know that you really like to shop.

Chris Connell said...

i liked the use of descriptive phrases like the wonderous halls. I think that it shows a kind of radience and beauty.