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- Alma Sanhcez
- WELL MY NAME IS ALMA SANCHEZ IM 14 YEARS OLD.I LOVE TO HANG OUT WITH MY FRIENDS AND I LOVE TO PARTY!!!!!
2 comments:
I really liked the way you gave examples of the things you want to buy and the store doesn't have it. I can relate to this because i also get mad at this. For example when i buy some shoes and there isn't my size. I think that you can improve this by writting more and being more descriptive.
I liked how you showed your anger or upset-ness for the lack of items that you needed. I too feel the same when I am looking for things that I want to buy. I think that if you elaborate or write more and give more examples this could be even better.
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